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10-14-2009, 11:18 AM
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|  What do you think about my lyrics? I think I just got it done? There you go again making me think about making me think about those late Friday nights with me coming up to see your smile to hear your laughs of love Do you think of me do you miss me as much do you still love me like you always said you would oh baby I miss you more than you know I miss looking into you're baby blue eyes My heart has a hole in it that only you can fill Do you think of me do you miss me as much do you still love me like you always said you would oh baby you are the one who made me whole, my world has been black with you not here you are the one, The one who makes it complete, I love you I need you here tonight Powered by Yahoo Answers |
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10-14-2009, 11:22 AM
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| pretty gay, man. Powered by Yahoo Answers |
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10-14-2009, 11:24 AM
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| Gay?That's just because he's a man..I think it's cute..good..and simply lovely..keep it up Answer mine? http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20091014105944AAFybeF Powered by Yahoo Answers |
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10-14-2009, 11:32 AM
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| Cleveland 10/14/09 Revise,..get rhymes,..make the second rhyme line stand,.. Give The fourth rhyme line a new expression,.somethin' cathy,. Do variations on Baby,..once with blue eyes,..maybe,. You got there - good bodiment,..however,,..just work it to fit some good accompaniment. The Main Man. Powered by Yahoo Answers |
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10-14-2009, 12:50 PM
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| I like, but if I were you, I'd turn it into screamo. But thats just me ;DD Powered by Yahoo Answers |
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